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Sunday, December 11, 2005

Helpless soul

38 years ago
the adventure began
i rushed
i struggled
i won the battle
no doubt
i fought to enter
the darkest warm world
could see nothing
could hear nothing
became independent
was it a mistake?
was it a punishment?
i cried
no one heard
i begged
no one sympathised
waited impatiently
to see the light
beyond the darkest world
13th. Oct 1966
a new world
was it a promise?
was it a new hope?
no doubt
brightness everywhere
lights everywhere
could see everything
could hear everything
became independent
was it a mistake?
was it a punishment?
day by day
months after months
years gone by
i still explore the life
i experience the pain
i see torture everywhere
there is no promise
there is no hope
i cry
i beg
to be free again.

posted by venuss66 at 12/11/2005 09:46:00 am

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